The fear of nothing.

• Artist: SpawnSoul1337
• Description: Just a short poem inspired by some odd music i had on at the time. ( No lyrics in the music so it wasn't stolen lol. )
  
  Comments appreciated preferably criticism :). Harsh or non harsh,many thanks.
• Date: 10/06/2008
• Tags: fear nothing

Breathing is such a bore when there's no one to comprehend with what you have to say,
It's like i'm stuck, just spinning around in this little world of mine,
In the head above my shoulders more hardship,
Seeing all these small things that once made me happy, now just angers me,
Sleep : You would have thought the easy escape, but it's there in my dreams,
Haunting me, making me aware of fear that i cannot bear to live without.

It's still there just doesn't go away. My brain cannot cope with what it is to come,
Just something that stays in my imagination & reality.

Comments

[1so_so11rry_ari11]

ugh.... dont listen to them below.... it makes sense if you really feel it... step in your shoes you can find that no one gets you so why try to make them get it.... and i get it so keep it up okay.... ^_^ heart 5/5

[SuperModel4life]

i dont get it ....

[cawksandwich2]

i'm a bit confused. i think there is a better poem lurking beneath the surface of that one and if you re-worked some of the ideas a bit you could improve it. Good work though.