The stars, past and tears.

• Artist: SoulPyro
• Description: A poem I wrote dedicated to the stars.
• Date: 10/05/2008
• Tags: starspasttears

The Stars, The Past, and The Tears.

I lay on my back on this soft green, green grass.
While pondering theories about science and mass.

I stare up at the stars as I remmeber the past.
Like the day I went fishing and broke the cast.
Or how about the day when we played football, if only I was so fast.

As I stare at the stars remmebering what was,
tears bleed out of my eyes just because.

If only now was then things would be okay again.
If only now was then I would be happy again.

The stars slowly fade as the sun beings to rise.
It becomes time to finally say our good-byes.

Comments

[SweetSerenades]

cool its AWESOMEFULL

[Sky Wolf Morte23]

stars disappear and so does love but when it is finally over we can try to be merry again

[The Original Waffle]

It's REALLY good. I like how you made it about the stars and at the same time made it about you're past because that's what they remind you of. My favorite line is "AsI stare at the stars remmebering what was,
tears bleed out of my eyes just because. 5/5 ^.^

[Pain-Killer 4 Dead Angels]

I never comment unless its awesome or worth it.
So your awesome. <3
5/5