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My heart gets overwhelmed
with neither love or despair
I need some assitance
please tell me you care.
If anything, now
is the time i need you
don't you walk away
like you normally do.
For once in your life
come back for me
and look at my eyes
like you can actually see
who I've become
who I am
Who i use to be before
I stopped giving a dam.
One step, two steps
Three steps, four
but then you turn back.
leaving me once again sore.
I pray with all my heart
that someone will come for me
and help me, rescue me
Please don't leave me be.
- by temporarymisfortune |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/04/2008 |
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- Title: I Pray
- Artist: temporarymisfortune
- Description: Ughh, not the greatest thing in the world. Critique it please!!!
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: pray
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Ms Make Me Smile - 10/04/2008
- i liked it i thought it was a bit boring. it would be better if it was rewritten with a little bit more anger and pain.it just seemed a bit random
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