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The dove has been shot
The branch has been burned
It’s blood we have sought
Why haven’t we learned?
People are dying
Chaos has conquered
Jesus is crying
The crow is our bird
It’s eaten our eyes
And has made us blind
Water of life dries
As we are unkind
But this can all change
With one thing: a sign
The key to our chains
‘Twill unlock our minds
- by tragic faerie tale |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/03/2008 |
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- Title: Tears of Blood
- Artist: tragic faerie tale
- Description: its short but to the point. enjoy!
- Date: 10/03/2008
- Tags: tears blood wartime peace
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- tragic faerie tale - 10/03/2008
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sorry i kinda logged off after i submitted this..
@summer_fall_winter_spring -- well thats not fair. you can at least give it a chance
@suenya92 -- thanks!
@kiwi-niijachan -- yup *nods* im glad you like it =)
@deadlylight6 -- i want world peace lol! thats what the "sign" is. the peace sign. anyway, i know thats not possible--to have 100% peace i mean--but i want people to care enough to try - Report As Spam
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 10/03/2008
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You titled your poem "Tears of Blood."
I will rate you a one and not even read after that. - Report As Spam
- suenya92 - 10/03/2008
- wow biggrin awesome. i like it smile
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- KIWI-NIIJACHAN - 10/03/2008
- Yes I also see where this is going...I like this alot. As you said..."short but to the point"!
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- Deadlylight6 - 10/03/2008
- i understand where ur going at but...what is the change u want?
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