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The valley lives in a distant place.
Growing far from human hands.
The old creaking trees,
Are wise with age.
They whisper secrets,
Into ignorant ears.
Who only need to learn how to listen.
While the long cream wheat,
Brushes our consciousness.
Willing the world to fall into its trance.
Dancing on skin,
That only needs to learn how to feel.
As colors of endlessness sing to our souls.
Waiting for eyes that know how to see.
We walk in our dreamland wishing for more.
When the players of life perform their simplicity.
If only we understood understanding,
To sit in the grass
And wait, watch, and listen
- by cheerios18 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/01/2008 |
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- Title: The Valley's Lesson
- Artist: cheerios18
- Description: a little something i did in English today. I think it might need some tweaking but more or less it's pretty coolieo. Really though just think about it peeps, just sit outside close your eyes and take some time to just listen.
- Date: 10/01/2008
- Tags: valleys lesson
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Ines Verdelet - 10/02/2008
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A few grammatical errors.
There is great context and beautiful imagery in the poem, however. 4/5 - Report As Spam
- cheerios18 - 10/01/2008
- it's a poem but ******** I don't care if you get drunk and burst it out ^_^
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- Hair4ya - 10/01/2008
- Smawesome song
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