who?

• Artist: Elena the Silent
• Description: one night i was just really upset after my dad left for work. he hadn't been around alot and i was feeling somewhat deserted. i don't like this one all that much because i'm not fond of almost anything i write that's depressing.
• Date: 10/01/2008
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who...
who will help me now?
i'm falling so fast so hard
i can't stop as the ground races up towards me
i can't feel myself breath
i can't hear my heart
i've lost the ability to think
will you...
will you help me before i am struck?
before the ground is no longer racing towards me but actually consuming me
before i am burried
before i am no more but a faint memory
before the dreams become reality
not the dreams but the nightmares
the ones that wake me up at night in a cold sweat
will you let it happen again
will i find myslef waking up to the sound of my own screaming
...or will i just not wake up this time?
who's to say what is coming the next day

Comments

[CharenceAM]

really good poem..

[citygurl__63-wisteria-]

wow this poem is really good and there isn't anything wrong with depressing poetry some of the best poets wrote alot of things that were depressing