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"Forever", said she,
"Never apart, we're meant to be."
"Forever", said he,
"Nothing will come between you and me."
For it seemed that they were destined,
Of course they were,
How were they not?
They were inseparable, indestructible.
In love and in control.
They had this way,
To melt each others hearts,
And fog up each others minds.
They thought nothing else but of each other.
And how they expressed love was pure beauty.
Quietly sitting beside running water,
Sunlight dazzling their eyes.
Running fingers through one another's hair,
And passionately kissing,
For what seemed like not forever,
But not long enough...
Each time there was time well spent,
With no regrets, and nothing but smiles.
Eyes still sparkling as they were before,
Possibly even brighter now,
As what they had just experienced,
Was far greater than anything imagined...
'Twas not an eternity however...
Though that didn't matter,
Any time they spent with each other,
Was a great experience in itself.
So many cute adventures,
And a whole lot of giggles to match,
Kisses and cuddles, love and trust.
And certainty to top it off...
- Title: True Love
- Artist: L-SUBARU
- Description: This is a free-verse poem I wrote a little while ago. I quite like it.
- Date: 09/29/2008
- Tags: true love lsubaru
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Comments (4 Comments)
- MyWishfulHope - 04/04/2009
- That was so touching, I love it.
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- ll Daoth ll - 12/21/2008
- This is a pretty sweet poem!>.<
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- Usagi-Kins8 - 09/30/2008
- OMG IT SOUNDS SO CUTE AND NICE ^^ i love it
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- Toastbusters - 09/29/2008
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Reading that was an experience one might label "mundane".
The words are nicely assembled (sort of), but there's nothing real there. It's just some people who get off on seeing eachother - I don't feel their love because it's not special. Why are they important? Why is their love magical? Make me feel their love, damnit! - Report As Spam