Warrior Arising

• Artist: WordsGirl
• Description: Okay, this was written by a friend of mine, and he told me I could post it here to see what people thought. He sent me three poems, so I might put more out if people ask by pming me. :)
• Date: 09/29/2008
• Tags: warrior arising

They say Death walks this battlefield and perhaps they are right.
I see the souls of the fallen and hear their ghosts in the night.
I fall to my knees and cry to the darkness for those friends I lost in my stride.
I walk on with enduring pain and my sword dragging at my side.
As the armies of the damned approach I know all hope is lost.
We fought them to the very last all for a meaningless cost.
And then a revelation as I look on towards the heavens above.
I draw my sword and charge back into battle to avenge the people I love.

By: JDR

Comments

[wiccanmother_zoey]

I will agree with SRD sakura. very nicely done. talent, yes, and a glowing way with words. true mastery. reminds me of one of my story charcaters actually. very good job. keep writing!

[Ms Make Me Smile]

i really like it,well no i love it,it explains soldiers at war perfectly,tell your friend there an amazing writer,true talent