You And Me In The Starry Sea

• Artist: darkjames13
• Description: well, honestly, i dont copied it from anywhere....
  it is my poem that i used in our school contest....
  here's the topic
  "on your wild imagination"
  and success
  i finally win that contest
  
• Date: 09/27/2008
• Tags: beneath starry

Tell me what you see
when you close your eyes

I see the stars in the open skies
I see everywhere,in the darkness
there are lights

Tell me what you see
When you close your eyes
Don't you feel me here in your heart tonight

I feel you
I feel me
I feel us beneath the starlit sky

Tell me what you see
When you close your eyes
Dont you sense like an angel inside

I see,as we lie beneath the stars
I realize how small we are
and
I see the lights of paradise
Behind the back of fireflies.

Tell me what you see
When you close your eyes
Dont you think the moon has eyes

I see the moon and i see the stars
I see us among the sparks
The stars tell a story of everything and time
and
They tell me that you are mine

I see so many sights unseen
I feel so many feelings unfelt
Is it you or is it me ?
or is it just us beneath the starry sea...

Comments

[_Roooose_]

Hm. Apart from the fact that... the grammar in your description is hideous, and the poem is fine, it doesn't really add up. So yeah, you probably copied it. smile

[legowizard4]

once i saw ure poem i emeidatly thought of a song by nickelback called if everyone cared. listen to it sometime it sounds almost exactly like ure poem except you switched the words around and most of ure poem is ure own but listen to it sometime and you will find it sounds kind of like ure poem besides that it is pretty good i enjoyed reading it thanks for posting it.