When I Breathe In

• Artist: x Rosabella x
• Description: In March, when I found out my Grandma had lung cancer
• Date: 09/26/2008
• Tags: breathe sorrow cancer

When I breathe in
When I breathe out
I want to scream
I want to shout

I feel like a weight
is on my chest
It hurts so much
Its hard to rest

The news I heard
Broke me in two
Its like the news
Cannot be true

For her, I'll think positive
For her, I will smile
For her, I'll be happy
If just for awhile

I need your smiles
I need your touch
Please don't ever think
You could love me too much

Please hold my hand
Through every day
And I'll always hold yours
No matter what comes our way

Comments

[bvuaeilbkjf89s7u]

she spelled "please" rite............it was amazing...........read mine sometime

[daddysgirl1000]

You spoke the truth in rhyming,And from your heart.And thats the way to do it.

[AllykinsDuh]

Aw! its beautiful!
i love it.

[Hacked By Blank]

You shouldnt focus on rhyming. Try and focus on what it means to you. Poems arent all about the rhymes you know wink

[Mecca Against Reality]

I think you meant 'please' instead of 'pleae', otherwise it was alright.

[Prince Odyssius]

It reminds me of how we need to be with al of our loved ones all the time.