My dear friend.

• Artist: kim13_dei
• Description: This kind of poem is dedicated to a person that i really hate
  she used to be my friend
  but that doesn't matter know...
  
  please rate and comment
  and sorry if my spelling or grammar aren't great...
• Date: 09/25/2008
• Tags: friend nobody stupid

My dear friend,
You believe that your lies
turns you into a perfect person.
But deep inside
you know,
that you are an hypocrite.
You love hurting people
only to call the attention
of everybody.
Why is that you can't realize
that nobody cares about you?
From now on,
you are alone in the world,
don't try to call for help,
because nobody will come.
Why is that you can't understand
that for me you are nothing
but rubbish.
You know that i won't walk
next to you through this path.
But, why are you still here?
You are hurting me
and i won't tolerate it anymore.
Get out of my life!

Comments

[Tsuki Kurai]

This is absolutely terrible. No rhyme scheme, you obviously didn't proofread it or else there wouldn't be so many mistakes. The theme is terrible as well. No one wants to read a poem about hate.

[Avzel]

I thought this poemwould be less angry and more "even though you are a hypocrite and hurt everyone, can't we see that we care about YOU and not your ridiculous persona that we see through...I will be waiting on the other side when you decide to grow up."
But instead you were just getting your rage out. Why don't you show it to her?