I'll Be On My Way

• Artist: hikari546
• Description: Just a little something I wrote, well thought of and then wrote I guess. It's not quite done as you can tell, I just wanted to put it down to know what everyone thinks ^_^
• Date: 09/23/2008
• Tags: poem bored

Till Death departs I'll be on my way,
Living my life without a complaint to say.
Not even raising a fist dawn or day;
Nothing to do, except to be on my way.

People will laugh, toil, and snare
While friends may give a shivering glare.
But every morning and every night;
I'll be on my way, with all my might

Comments

[Patt Smear]

It's not very good, I'm sorry.
Very cliche