why do u

• Artist: iiTIMER iiBSY iiGHH
• Description: it didnt take me long u like it or u do
• Date: 09/19/2008
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why just tell me why
why do i try?to make u happy?
why do i try to give u more?
why do i try so very hard to make u love me more then u already do?
why do i cut myself?
why do i run to my room at night and turn my music up so very loud?
do u even know i exist?
u say you'll kill me if u had to
and yet when i hold the knife to my chest.
i can't seem to kill myself...
why do i try and live?
why can't u for once say u love me?
am i truly bad like u say i am?
i help out.but what more can i do?
u say i'm dumb,and stupid.
am i really?am i all u say i am?
do u know how i feel?
no u don't...u never will.
why do i try?is not my Question anymore.
i know why i try...do u

Comments

[sheri-b]

this is so deep. this is one of the most realistic pieces i have seen. i can feel your pain!

[Chastity Flanderz]

It's good for the sense of conveying a messege, but it doesn't come off as a poem unless you read it right. It could come off like a conversation, but nice go at it.