Without You

• Artist: Online Violation
• Description: This is a very old poem I wrote but it's still one of my favorites. I know the rhyming scheme isn't right and the structure is faulty but I wrote this in a rush. It was just a poem about how I got my heart broke for the first time and I didn't have any idea of what was going on. Just everything else fading to gray while you focus on one single thing.
  
  Just an old poem, constructive criticism is welcomed.
• Date: 09/13/2008
• Tags: without heartbreak love loss

Stop making me cry,
Stop making me miss you,
Stop making me think you ever cared
When I think of you,
It only hurts,
Because you're not really there
You make me want to scream!
Rip out my hair,
Because of you I'm living in a nightmare

Comments

[nedyca_94]

you have a talent too