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i am an attractive girl
i am engaged and so proud
that i am so popular
among this wealthy crowd
i kiss my fiancè
lightly on his lips
and i promise to meet him
tonight at the eclipse
he walks of to his room
to dress into different clothes
and i follow later
my status exposed
i am walking alone
i am so happy
i was so excited
that i started clapping
then one lonesome man
wearing only shorts
was so attractive
damn these thoughts
i should be greatful
for this new life
then he notices me
and threatens me with a knife
i am so scared
i am so frightened
and it felt so bad
when his hold tightened
then he grabs me
and takes me away
into the forest
where the trees sway
there he does inhumane things
and then he stabs me several times
he leaves me bleeding on the ground
and strokes my hair one more time
but there was something there
in his hazel-brown eyes
the look of regonition
but it was mine
this hate that filled me
clouded my mindt
hat made me realise
that my fiancè wasn't so kind
i fought with tears
that were tears of hate
and i reached for his hand
this act as bait
he grabs my hand in both of his
i reach for the knife
and stabbed his throat
why did he do this to our life
i lay there motionless
as i reminisce
this horrible night
and that one last kiss
- by vampiress_of_the_dark |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/12/2008 |
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- Title: Why my fiancè?
- Artist: vampiress_of_the_dark
- Description: isn't it strange when mr right is so wrong, well that is what this poem is about
- Date: 09/12/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Sympathetic Desire - 07/24/2009
- You need to work on your spelling, but the concept was very touching and sad.
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- xxkatie_in_th3_mom3ntomxx - 10/17/2008
- sweet lol im kinda ov confused wit sum words but luved it
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- - bbyLOVEx - 10/04/2008
- love it. 5/5 <3.
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- xCaught Deadx - 10/04/2008
- Wow that was amazing. Really loved it
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- La Chibet - 09/12/2008
- Well when it first started off i was like ugh another one of those stupid lovey dovey poems about a happy joyfull conetion between to hearts. But as the poem turnd to gray i became in love with it and now its my fav. So i wanted to say this was a amasing poem it made my emotions dance going from hate to a backwards change to love. 5/5
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- Hashupa - 09/12/2008
- i like it
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