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Tonight, the moonlight is my only savior.
Tonight, I’ll fall back to a feral behavior.
My eyes turn savage, my blood runs cold.
In restless arms, broken bodies I’ll hold.
Excitement rises as the time, it nears.
Now mortals, I am worse than all your fears!
The scent of blood grows stronger with time.
I’m growing euphoric as your blood is mine!
And Oh, the wonder of it all!
The freedom of giving in to midnight’s bloody call!
The vengeance flowing through my veins,
The joy, the sorrow, the unearthly shame!
Giving in to it all, what joy it brings!
Who knew that death caused all these things?
I’ll take my life, and give it away
If only to feel this one more day!
I’ll run through the streets at the midnight hour,
I’ll scream a requiem during my crimson shower!
The warm blood touches my glistening skin,
I feel the life come rushing in!
I’m unstoppable, I’m contagious!
The earth will hate my name for ages!
All those humans you hold so dear,
They tremble at my feet in fear!
I’ll devour their flesh, one by one,
Soon the world will turn and run!
They flee my name, I haunt their minds
They’re all my prey, All mine! All mine!
And soon my joy bursts from my veins!
My own blood drives me insane!
I’ll frolic in these fields of flesh,
To await my never-ending death!
- by iBrightScales |
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- | Submitted on 09/10/2008 |
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- Title: Crimson Shower
- Artist: iBrightScales
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Description:
I wrote this last night, and I like it <3
Please comment, and be brutally honest :D - Date: 09/10/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Mecca Against Reality - 09/28/2008
- Brutally Honest? I loved it; although, I do agree with Dyingviolet, the syllable count threw me off a bit (only on some lines). Other than that, it was a great poem, it will be going on my favorites list! 4/5
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- Caleco - 09/27/2008
- that's amazing. That's one of the best poems i've read on Gaia or anywere's else. I read that and feel so at peace with my thaughts knowing i'm not the only one
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- Pure_Dove - 09/10/2008
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Oooooo i love it!~
Beautiful!~ 5 stars!~ - Report As Spam
- Dyingviolet - 09/10/2008
- Very creative rhyming couplet use. In the future, though, you might want to consider counting the syllables of each line to make sure the numbers are equal to each other. 4/5
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