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My Perfection has come down to this, You Are Strong.
You Are Brave,
You Make This Happen.
You Have And WILL Reach Future goals.
No Matter How Emo You Get,
No Matter How Weak Your Heart is,
No Matter How Sucidial,
Love Broken,
Hurt from Words,
Sick of being Tormented,
Hurt From Thoughts,
Dreams,
Memories or Loved ones.
You Are NOTHING.
Stop trying to live your life.
Because as soon as you live it…
..You will Die...
..This is My Advice to you.
Take it in and use it too.
I’ll Join you on the other side.
- by Time is on our side |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/08/2008 |
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- Title: It Has Come down to this...
- Artist: Time is on our side
- Description: I'm Sorry.
- Date: 09/08/2008
- Tags: racheldiedforyou iishadez iijack rachel85boca rachel96boca
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Deityofire - 07/09/2009
- Did your feelings change at the 5th line?
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- Im Lavender Hear Me Rawr - 02/14/2009
- srry but that had no meaning...r u trying 2 advise some1 or write a pome?... sad
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- hoophoophooray - 09/08/2008
- A little blunt. You've way overused Capital letters. Try using poetry to describe rather than define what the narrator is experiencing, don't just tell us, move us. Basically, overdramatic much?
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- Frosted Cookii3 - 09/08/2008
- ... O.o that makes... no sense... whatsoever... sorry but 1
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