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Show me your soul, have no fear
My life's a blur but my words are clear
I lost my way for the way you shine
Listen up now, sunshine of mine
Even though you doubt it's true,
More than you'd guess lives in you
Yet you resist and disbelieve -
Let that go, be brave to breathe!
Only one step, it is time
Vow to love yourself, sunshine-
Everything will be just fine.
- Title: Breath
- Artist: bobby c3
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Description:
A song i wrote when i was 13.
ive always loved poetry and i found this the other day when i was clearing my room.
Please dont be scared to post HONEST comments - Date: 09/07/2008
- Tags: breath
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Comments (3 Comments)
- lDrake - 07/25/2009
- I definatley like it :] And i agree that you should keep writing. I have sort of a thing that everything has to rhyme or at least sound like it does, and this one hits it on the mark. Well done
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- SmartPsycho - 10/20/2008
- its awsome biggrin
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- iBrightScales - 09/07/2008
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I like it.
It's a little short for my taste, but you've definitely got talent.
I hope to see more poems from you soon <3 - Report As Spam
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