My Metaphor Poem

• Artist: Its Kamikio
• Description: This is for a school project. we were supposed to write a intro poem, and i chose this option for the style. I think its ok, but im still not the most creative person. (im a private, quiet person btw)
• Date: 09/06/2008
• Tags: metaphor poem bird school

I am a bird
in the air.
In the element
I do not wish to leave.
I fly free
Surveying the scene from afar.
Silence only broken by the twittering
of my companions.
Twisting and flipping through the air
dancing a beautiful dance
with me.

Comments

[aidan scorch]

I like its brevity. A little straigt-foreward for my tastes, but vivid and sweet all the same.