- i wanted2 c wat random pp thought of mi poetry cause of course ppl u know will say its good no matter wat. mrgreen
- by x-fancydragongirl-x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/25/2008 |
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- Title: carved in stone
- Artist: x-fancydragongirl-x
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Description:
my words are written on the wall,
in my mind,
in my soul,
using only your blood,
they will always drip the truth,
the bitter sweet revenge is near,
you will fear it,
you will curse it,
revenge is not yet set in stone,
not yet anyway,
it can still be changed,
but can you?
by:fancydragongirl - Date: 08/25/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- shinitai666 - 01/07/2009
- You switched the description and poem parts... Other than that, it's ok. Doesn't flow as well as it could.
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- NebuChi3 - 12/13/2008
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Your description is supposed to be where you put your poem in... neutral
But the poem was really good!
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- calibaby20 - 12/12/2008
- hey, that is an awesome poem! I think it is great!
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