Redemption (Someday We Shall)

• Artist: SKBCTayuyaFluteofDeath
• Description: A poem I wrote at camp. We were doing a workshop about redemption and what it meant to us. SOMEBODY READ THIS!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
• Date: 08/19/2008
• Tags: redemptionpoemsomeday

"Someday we shall find Redemption,
Someday we shall..."
'Someday'
A word we use often.
A word that means so much
to us, who wish,
And yearn, and long
For so much, so many things;
Yet believe that we have not yet
The time nor the means.

"Someday we shall find Redemption,
Yes, someday we shall,"
And that 'Someday',
That day shall come when we,
Who wish, and yearn,
And long for what we believe
Is out of our reach,
Deemed impossible,
Find the strength to chase
Those longing, those hopes and dreams.

Then shall come the day,
The 'Someday'
That we hope, we wish, we pray for,
Only then shall we find
REDEMPTION.

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

that is good. in my opinion, life itself and the painful events that happen to us, to everyone, is redemption. even a slight wrong thought can be a sin and we have to pay for it, whether its right at the spot or later in life. hence all the bad things that could happen to any individual. so we live as redemption to/for those who lived before us, and to get out of redemption, is death as our salvation.

[flauterfli]

That's rather good. smile