what am i

• Artist: spellgirl219
• Description: this is about the darkness in the world
• Date: 07/31/2008
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i am a girl
i wonder where you are
i hear the crys and scarems of the loney people
i see death all arond me
i want the madness of the world to go away
i pretend your not there
i feel the pain of the world
i touch your soft skin
i worry the world will come to an end
i cry when you let me fall in to the darkness
i understand it not over and it never will be
i say to myself this must end
i dream and i know that in the end we will walk throw the gates of heven together

Comments

[mq90x9p]

i agree with ninja... there were a lot of grammatical errors that bothered me. but if you look beyond that, the writing was absolutely wonderful! smile

[Xxninja_piratexX]

Er..... You had lots of grammatical errors.... (( Ha, I sounded smart )) Anywho, other than that, It was fantastic! ^ ^