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As I walk down this narrow path, I look to the distance and all I can see is a faint picture of you...
If I could I would take it all away,
there would be nothing left to say...
If I could I would take away all the times we had together,
Im sure you found someone better...
If I could I wouldnt of made you cry,
because it made me feel like i wanted to die...
If I could I would of been better to you,
but now theres nothing we can do...
If I could I would of seen things through,
our love was so precious and new...
If I could I wouldnt of said those things,
each time I think about you my heart sings...
If I could I would take the pain away,
so you wouldnt have to deal with it another day...
everytime i hear that song...i cant help but sing along...
everytime i hear your name...i cant help but feel the same...
everytime i hear your voice... i cant help but rejoice...
theres nothing left to say...
i cant take it all away...
who knew it would hurt like this...
our love was a hit or miss...
i cant help but feel all this pain...
it is driving me so insane...
i want to take it all away...
i want to take it all away...
i want to just...forget about you...
i want to just...forget about you...
- by burnunknown |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/28/2008 |
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- Title: Broken
- Artist: burnunknown
- Description: i wrote this while seeing my friend go thru a rough break up...i wrote this for him so he would know i been thru it and so has alot of people...gimme ur thoughts ok?
- Date: 07/28/2008
- Tags: broken song heartbreak pain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- burnunknown - 01/19/2009
- thanks for the comments plz keep them coming
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- burnunknown - 01/19/2009
- biggrin
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- [ Sayome ] - 09/29/2008
- Hmm..Twitch is right,....does sound like lyrics...maybe you could make it into a song or something...either way, awesomeness on an awesome-stick. 5/5.
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- Twitchums_1 - 07/29/2008
- really good. you write lyrics often? because this definitely looks like it could be lyrics. read mine? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=100014400
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