Cryptic Catastrphy

• Artist: luv_of_Anime
• Description: Short but sweet, just like all my others.
  This is how I felt when I was betrayed by a very close friend... I mat have forgiven that person but I will never forget.
• Date: 07/28/2008
• Tags: toxic grace betrayal paralyzed

A toxic existence will surely be my end.
The ground shakes and I cripple and bend.
Falling so hard I brake my face.
I never did understand the meaning of grace.

I don't believe in the meaning of love.
Inhale the smoke that floats above.
Dying inside from the unbearable loss.
Complete and total, betrayal and cross.

Paralyzed from my head to my toes.
I fumble and crawl to a place no one knows.

Comments

[Clug]

I really adore this. It's really intense, but short and simple. I like that. You don't have to draw something on and on with huge words that half of the population never uses anyway. This is a perfect example of simplicity not being a bad thing. The rhyme and flow of it was really nice - it made it easy to read and I didn't get stuck at any place trying to catch the flow again. Great write. <3