Bullet

• Artist: iKins
• Description: A poem I wrote when I was feeling depressed a few months ago.
• Date: 07/28/2008
• Tags: bullet poem

Bullet
When life seems impossible to handle,
It gets harder and harder, it burns out, just like a candle.
You get so wry you can’t even see,
You get so depressed, it just can’t be.
You play as one of their pegs,
Ignoring what your heart begs.
You want to let go, but can’t.
You want to stop the pain, but all you do is rant.
You want it all to end right now; pull it!
You know you want--NEED that bullet.

Comments

[Monblanc]

Very intense. 3nodding Reminds me of when I went through that whole "suicidal phase" .... Except I didn't have a gun. 3nodding
Brilliant.

[peacekitten65]

I liked that a lot. There was alot of passion there & it was intense. Great job! I know how you felt cuz I went through something like that too & also wrote a couple of poems. I hope those feelinfs are gone now, but that dosen't mean you have to stop writing because you have a really amazing talent there!