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Quiet, my child.
No tears will heal your broken heart;
no cries will heal what's been torn apart.
Talk to me.
I'm here to listen to your pain.
Wait--hush and listen to the pouring rain.
It cries for you.
Just hold my hand and we'll make it through.
Just hug me; I'll see what I can do.
I'm here.
Trust me enough to talk to me, to explain.
Just hold my hand, and listen to the rain.
- Title: Listen to the Rain
- Artist: mq90x9p
- Description: I just wrote this poem recently. I hope you enjoy, and please tell me what you think! :)
- Date: 07/28/2008
- Tags: rain brokenheart mq90x9p cries
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Comments (7 Comments)
- MademoiselleHarmonie - 03/15/2009
- Rain~ Rain ~ :]
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- snowtiger2 - 10/07/2008
- awesome
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- wander my friend - 09/17/2008
- this would be best as a performance peice
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- Teragen - 09/16/2008
- I think you should try and make a melody to go along with this, or at the least have someone else make up a melody for it. It needs to be a song! It has all the lyrical beauty of one, but all it's missing is the music!!! 5/5
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- papershelf i c i c l e s - 09/16/2008
- thats really good. kudos :3
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- Xxgodess_of_thunderxX - 09/15/2008
- this is amazing it's more like amazing lyrics to a lullaby in my mind, :'( i'm all teary eyed now
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- kitty649 - 09/14/2008
- beautiful... i love that gaia has a writing forum now because thats what i'm interested in.. anyways thats beside the point. this poem is beautiful, what else can be said you have a talent so keep up the good work smile
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