The Reflection of Love

• Artist: cupcake_ninja08
• Description: okay I write a lot of poems, and romance and sadness are my two favorite topics, and sometimes it makes sense to me to put them both together, so here is my romance poem of a shattered mirror, that I just came up with in five minutes! plz comment and rate! Thank you!
• Date: 07/26/2008
• Tags: romance reflect mirror

The dirty mirror stained with an outline of a memory,
that you and I were meant to be.
I see a reflection that tears my heart out,
a vision of you and how our life was.
What ever happened to ourselves!

Now whenever I see a reflection,
I think of our lost love,
never making a connection.
Never to be free to reach out high and above!

I always see that image you left in my mind,
a vision of love that never should been left behind.
You held me so gengerly I thought might heart would melt,
but when you kissed me my soul went as well.

The mirror that trapped our love, is now laying shattered,
in fact that it will never be replaced makes it a sad matter.
Although the reflection is not able to be fixed, and is broken,
and does not mean our love won't live forever in the end!

Comments

[cupcake_ninja08]

oops I did misspell gingerly didn't I, that was my bad, I wrote this late at night, and yeah I am little romantic when it comes to love, so please forgive me on that, but thanks for the advice and the comment!

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I hate the fact that you misspelled "gingerly", and used "sad matter"! and was a little repetitive in using "love"! Damn, because aside from those things, this poem is superb. I am now interested in reading more of your material... 3.75/5. (4.25/5, if you spruce it up, a little.)