Storms

• Artist: Pippa-chan-face
• Description: I was just rummaging through some old notebooks and I found this rather uplifting and rather short poem I wrote not too long ago. I thought it was a nice change from the many poems about despair I've been seeing recently, as beautifully written as they are. Well, here's the edited version! Enjoy!
• Date: 07/25/2008
• Tags: storms flower determination rain lightning

Until rain comes, I thirst,
But thunder must come first.
The lightning does strike down,
But I still hold my ground.
But then, clouds back will shrink,
And after storms, I drink.

Comments

[Tsuki Kurai]

i like it! even if you think mine is better, (well i do too…) this is still really good! of course, i've been writing a long time! try making it centered, and color and text size pretty it up nicely! biggrin

[pSyChO aPpLe]

Its good!! I love how its so short and sweet yet the poem gives an illusion to the mind... lol i like it

[Special Agent Odd]

i write poems myself! this one is beautiful... it has meaning! you can actually FEEL something.
-underlander_geek