Walking The Right Path

• Artist: alexander pheonix
• Description: This is a poem I originally wrote on myspace. Please give me your honest opinion and don't hold back. Thank you.
• Date: 07/25/2008
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There are things in life we as people fail to notice. When we glorify the treasures we have obtained, do we ever reminisce on how we claimed them? Were our thoughts clear of unselfishness or filled to the brim with greed? When we cry or pout over the things we've lost, do we think of those who never had it at all? We live in a society where even the best isn't "good enough", where a friendly hello on the street will get you either little response or none at all. People don't even have moral standards anymore, it's always "what others will think of you". It is rare to find those to find those among us who still believe in showing kindness and bieng unselfish. Instead of living unoticed these are the people who should be our celebrities, our heroes, because these people have been blessed with the greatest gift of all... realization.

Comments

[Lord emo_sweetie]

hey if u wanna go out

[windmagician]

full stars easily

[The-Writer-Is-In]

Hmm…it has a good message, but it really doesn't seem much like a poem to me…