Suffering Pain

• Artist: l i v beckoned - - -
• Description: This was mostly based on my feelings towards a guy I liked who really treated me badly. So maybe some of you people out there can relate to it and actually know what I'm saying. It hits me deep down in the soul when I read it over and over again and hopefully you too.
• Date: 07/23/2008
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I'm sick of all the names
I'm sick of playing the games
I try to put my life on the line
Even to you I look just fine
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I try and try to make you see
But all I seem to do is plea
I try to tell you
But I feel so blue
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My way of living
Makes me start shivering
I feel a stiff sudden pain
Like a gush of waterfall rain
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I gave my all to you
But it wasn't true
I try to push you away
But my mind wants you to stay
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You come and come
But that makes me feel glum
I know that I need you
But I don't think you're true
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I have spent my life searching
But half of it hurting
I feel like I'm climbing a mountain
But I feel like I'm drowning in a fountain
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I need to keep you off my mind
But there is nothing to find
I spend my life alone
Wasting my time at home
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You took every part of me
So that now I can't see
I want to hurt you
Which I can't bring myself to do
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I love you too much now
But I just can't see how
To make you love me too
Love me like I love you

Comments

[the COOKIE god xXx]

awesome. it reminds me of something that happened a few months ago. 4/5

[holy hobo]

that is so good i cant put it into words you see i liked a girl so much she was my life i did everything for her and she broke up with me and i went like dead i didnt do anything for 2 weeks i cant really remember but i got over it it hurt though and that is exactly how i felt 5,000 stars 100% A+

[Mr_Ice 2707]

It does hit me too it reminds of when I liked a girl in my class but she just completely ignored me so then I said to myself,Who needs her? Now I have a girl prettier than her.anyway I loved it! 5 stars!!!