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most shows arnt real,
but some are like deal or no deal,
now almost every movie is a lie,
in a lot of movies they can fly,
people are scared by scary movies,
but there just movies,
NOT REAL,
they sit on their sets,
thinking of what to do next,
every movie thinks its the best,
but there all the same,
NOT REAL.
- Title: movies arn't real
- Artist: gghhjja
- Description: something i wrote, pls leave comments:)
- Date: 07/23/2008
- Tags: movie
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- blood_chick-4lyfe- - 07/24/2008
- damn niggga!!
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- Lanatic Night Stealer - 07/23/2008
- eh. its kinda ok im guessing
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- sexey tiney - 07/23/2008
- werid, but yet good all the same even though its realy oviuse. (sorry if i didnt spell that right but i realy dont care).
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- gghhjja - 07/23/2008
- i did forcefully rhyme but this one i made kinda fast so......
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- Atheshya - 07/23/2008
- One line here really bugs me: 'in a lot of movies they can fly'. Why, you ask? Because it's not really obvious who 'they' are - and if they're the movie viewers, it doesn't make since. Why can the viewers fly in the movie they're watching? As far as I can tell, that line exists only for rhyming. (that's what it means to have a forced rhyme) Also, this is a bit short...
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