Given up

• Artist: XshadowadamX
• Description: Basicly you won't get what im trying to say..unless you read my other poems. but it's basicly...all i did was wait for miranda to take me back...she hasn't and im a fool to still think it. So i gave up on her....after a long time of waiting....
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: heartbreak hopeless future

My emotions are eroded by tears,
Pocked by sorrow,
Tarnished by the hurt endured.
Yet here again
I stand
On the threshold of giving.
Balanced by indecision.
Fear roots my eager feet.
Remembering the pain,
I turn and walk away
From my undecided future

Comments

[i R E C K L E S S x]

Very big words, but I can tell what your saying. =3

[2muchanime4u]

your poetry has very beautiful meaning, the pain is clear and understood