Night

• Artist: -PaReLiSiTy_RaInS-
• Description: A writing that goes into depth of the double sided relationships that have plagued our being, which is presumed to have reared it's head in the life each and every individual- no matter of how short a visit given.
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: night doublesided

Night.
The double-edge sword, double-faced presence of the darkness
I stare into your enternal abyss.
Your face not seen, yet, mine as visible as the light--
Your enemy, to lay me down to sleep like the night of an old man drifting to his nightmares.
The heart of your being filled with happy sadness, sweet bitterness suffocating me into...
Nothingness.

Comments

[The Lady Andromeda]

I think it's beautiful.

[HUMIDIFIER]

'goes into the depth' of what? this is seven lines. the description tells more than the poem. the imagery is trite because it's presented so clumsily. there is nothing that warrants a revisit to this poem, and that troubles me.