Looking In The Mirror

• Artist: TylersBombina123
• Description: Please Rate,
  This is My First Song So Tell Me What You Think.
  I am only going to do the chorus
  Thank You..
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: wrotebyme

Im looking in the mirror,
Looking in the mirror,
Looking at you and me,
having fun,
and playin games,
and maybe even on the beach.
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Comments

[Fcukthepolice]

Cute. The first part is playful and draws me in. Fix the grammar and try to tie up the ending a little more smoothly.