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You used to keep in touch with me,
To sing with me, to be with me,
You went with no one else but me;
A special connection grown between you and I,
A connection that I thought it would never die.
But everything’s changed as time goes by;
Now that you’re gone in a blink of an eye
Like the star faded by the morning sky,
My heart’s crying everyday, every night,
Asking you to come back and hold me tight.
Before, you shed my countless tears,
Made me smile to cover my fears,
And listened up more than your ears;
No wonder why I’m longing for you more,
Though having you is possible no more.
Are you blind enough to see me crying?
Are you deaf enough to hear me calling?
Are you numb enough to feel I'm hurting?
Or maybe it's just me who don't anticipate
The time that love's battling with the Fate.
It may be too good to be true
To love you out of the blue;
But now, you love someone new
And sharing yourself with her tears me apart,
Knowing that I don't have a place in you heart.
- by sefairuhime1809 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: A Place In Your Heart
- Artist: sefairuhime1809
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Description:
I dedicated this poem to someone who used to be my friend...:'(
Anyway, this is the first poem I've done, and I was able to finish this so I can vent out my emotions.
And please, give comments not only to the content of my work, but also to the way I express my feelings. Pieces of advice are appreciated (not only for my benefit but for the benefit of the other Gaians who experienced or who are experiencing situation as same as mine). Thank you. - Date: 07/21/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- sefairuhime1809 - 07/27/2008
- thank you for appreciation. smile
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- babyface_assassins - 07/27/2008
- beautiful
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- sefairuhime1809 - 07/25/2008
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@allstarcutie171: hope that both of us will recover
@Mystic_Keisa: yeah, and anyway, i'm just starting to write a poem. thanks. smile - Report As Spam
- METRO SKiiES - 07/25/2008
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WOW...
Incredibly sad. Amazing. A way overused topic, in my opinion, all the sadness and depression and broken-heartedness... But I really love the rhyme scheme. No one respects rhymed poetry anymore which really bothers me. Keep up the amazing writing.
The only line that stuck out as awkward was, "Though having you is possible no more." It could be improved but the rest is amazing! - Report As Spam
- allstarcutie171 - 07/25/2008
- omg this is wonderful! it reminds me of my friend and me i can totally relate to u it made me remember all the good times i had with my friend and i made me cry
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- sefairuhime1809 - 07/23/2008
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thank you, guys, thank you... smile
@dolphinfin1105: *hug*
@coreycloud-: yeah, i really love him... sad - Report As Spam
- angelonse10 - 07/23/2008
- nice smile
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