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I trusted you to keep me safe,
To make sure I won’t give up no matter what.
But now here I am, lying on the floor,
All bloody bruised and cut.
I knew that I would miss you,
When you closed the brown door shut.
Telling me, “I will help you but not right now.”
And I replied “alright.”
But something deep inside me,
Told me that he was never coming back.
My droopy dazed dark blue eyes stalked him
As he left.
Like a wolfs yellow eyes,
Blazing in the night.
Then something hit me,
Like a bullet through game
A new feeling of hate swept through me.
I could never forgive him,
No matter what he did!
- Title: Sasuke's beggining of Hate
- Artist: Yvvki
- Description: To tell you the truth, this was a class assignment and at the time i was not thinking of Naruto. The teacher wanted us to write a poem on hate and trust... After looking at it (and reading it over alot) I realized that it was the emotion of Sasuke hating Itachi... weird huh? o_O;;
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: trust hate close
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Yvvki - 12/11/2009
- thanks biggrin
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- 96kathy - 12/29/2008
- AWESOME!
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- Gwendlen Gothica Raven - 12/22/2008
- Awsome poem!!!!
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