Poem for Grandfather.

• Artist: Wild Digital Heartache
• Description: A poem I wrote for my grandfather after he died. This is the first poem I have ever written so its probable not very good.
• Date: 07/20/2008
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I woke up this morning knowing nothing
Not worrying about you
The news came so sudden
Why did this happen
They said you would recover
Now I know
But you didn't suffer
It didn't hurt
I won't see you this October
Now your'e gone
But one day I will see you again
The day I am welcomed to heaven
Thats the day we will see each other again

Comments

[MelroseHime3316]

this poem is so touching, its sad too, there's a lot of emotion, even in those simple words, u did a good job, even if its only ur first poem

[Marionette_Mentation]

Sad but no much detail i wanted to know how you felt when this happened, were you shaking, did a rainy cloud appear, only you know as a reader of poetry i hope to feel the emotion in the writers words, i only felt shock nothing else.. and sorry for you.. comment back plz ^.^

[Wild Digital Heartache]

He wasn't on the news but the news came from my father who got a call from my grandmother.
Thx for all the coments smile

[KeiraShwartz]

im so srry, i kno how u feel and it IS a good poem

[Amra Rose]

this is very good...and just so you know bad times are normaly the awakining in good poets...

[loser_wit_moves]

Thats really good sad he was on the news? thats sad