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Excuse excuses and nothing more.
Is that really all you’re good for?
Nothing ever gets done
Never finished.
How do you possibly go on?
You’re a leech,
A burden,
A louse
A wreck
A wretch
Living off the accomplishments of others.
You help no one and harm everyone.
You do nothing but stall for time
Ridicule other’s mistakes
Overlooking your own.
You don’t deserve to live.
I hate you.
GO DIE
- Title: Excuses
- Artist: Fluff134
- Description: I felt wrather useless and wrote this when I felt like all I did in life was make excuses for why I did or did not do certain things....It's wrather short.
- Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: excuses
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Comments (5 Comments)
- wildblackfire - 12/31/2009
- emo
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- Rebel Marshmallow - 05/31/2009
- The last three lines kinda killed it, but other than that it's okay.
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- TheBringerOfFyer - 04/28/2009
- a little on the intense side...might want to mellow it a bit...other than that...3/5!!!! (3
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- Scarletgreen - 12/15/2008
- You truly wish you could go die? D: That's awful...Excuses are habits. Like any habit, their hard to break, maybe the hardest. We believe they will help escape us from the depth of trouble we are in, but they never work because they are nothing more than horrible lies that you will never be able to prove. Still, good, except for the go die. xD
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 07/19/2008
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Oy, the GO DIE thing sort of killed it but I like everything else about the poem.
I hope you don't feel this way about yourself now. D= - Report As Spam
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