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Sun baked stone sits, in formed walls.
Decorative tapestries hanging here and
there.
Only silence,
has ever broken the dawn
since the music stopped playing in the courtyard.
I walk the halls of the castle in the sky
my footsteps echoing throughout
it's empty halls.
I see gloves carefully laid out next to beds,
elegant dresses,
veils laden with rubies and silk
crowns lavishly worn once, then tossed aside
shattering the diamond encrusted lining,
my footsteps echo off of memories that were locked away in the pillows, and curtains of these rooms.
a long time ago,
the people here
all got bored,
cast their lives aside,
and leapt.

- Title: The Castle in the Sky
- Artist: Lijaa11
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Description:
this has no relation to Miyazaki's movie, Castle in the Sky.
I hope to pursue a career in writing, and seeing what millions of other people think of my poetry will really help me along with that...thanks in advance for your suppourt - Date: 07/19/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Davids Aphrodite - 01/13/2010
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i mean even more amazing xD
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- Davids Aphrodite - 01/13/2010
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amazing all good xD but try to elaborate on detail if u do that it would be amazing
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- XRoxySmart_gurlX - 07/19/2008
- Perfect-ly different but it'z really good and I like the description u made.GOOD LUCK THEN!
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- CheshireDaydreams - 07/19/2008
- Different...but in a good way. 4/5. Rate mine? (My World)
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- Kobey24 - 07/19/2008
- i just dont get it at all
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