Reality life.

• Artist: J 0 Y Z
• Description: This poem I have thought over and over about, "Is this what life really seems to be under all the quotes of how optimistic you should be?" This may or may not. But at my down times, it really seems like it's craved in stone.
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: truth real hard life

Without a moment to lose, my life slides away before me.

As my hand lose its grip.

I fall down to where all must arrive for its whether will nor desire strikes.

I stretch for help, to stop this bottomless nightmare.

My body stiffens as fate is to do to all.

This feeling that I never I never grasp to a pause.

For I just wish to hide in my hearts content desire.

In my heart, I feel no loneliness, no fret, no fear.

Yet I know, as well as many others out there, we are not in control of reality.

Comments

[NuLova]

this is a nice poem

[Ricochetra]

Ooooh,you speak the truth friend!

[XshadowadamX]

I love it. <3

[Ailis Nara]

this is a really great poem

[Cryomancy]

Very well written. I really felt like life is sort of, well, cruel-ish, no matter how many times people cheer you up.

[J 0 Y Z]

Please comment, this is my first try.

Thank yous.
-iCaoozles