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I've been leaving myself alone,
Trying to get you out of my life,
But after all this time,
I can't help myself but miss you.
You're once a dream that came true,
An illusion that turned to reality,
But suddenly, things turned differently,
The way they used to be,
You're the reason for my sleepless nights,
Because you keep staying on my mind,
I can't help myself from crying,
Because I'm missing you so much.
All the pain & sadness are bound inside my heart,
All the memories are still preserved in my mind,
I miss you so much,
Because I can't hide the fact that I'm still in love with you.
My life will never be the same again,
Now that you're gone,
I'll be trapped in this loneliness forever,
Unless you will bloom into my life again.
First, I'm still so In Love with you,
You told me the same, then left me,
Time has passed, everyday you're on my mind,
Your love is with someone else now,
The pain of losing you is still fresh in my brain,
Will we ever be together again, I say as I sob and mope
As each day passes, I lose a little more hope,
I'll always LOVE you
Take me back miranda please i beg of you.
- by XshadowadamX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Alone Without you
- Artist: XshadowadamX
- Description: I wrote this shortly after me and my girlfriend Broke up. I have no clue how it affected her. but other people say it's Really Depressing. *sigh*
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: heart love broken depressing
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind - 07/18/2008
- Some of the wording's a little funny, and I agree with MalicaNeko93, it is a little cliche and self-pitying. But I like it because you hardly ever see guys writing about their heart-break, and it's a good reprieve from all the pining girls (though I am myself one of them :XP )
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- 3m0azngurl - 07/18/2008
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it was a bit ~.... but i think it was great! it had great feeling! i loved it! i luv poetry... hey read mine... its smiles fade and then theres crying out!... well hope to read more of ur poems!
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- MalicaNeko93 - 07/18/2008
- The first paragraph was so good...but then the rest was a little mediocre and cliche...it's not so much depressing as it is self pity...I hope you got over miranda and with a little work you could actually make this a great poem that could possibly be published(good luck XD)
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- JaclynKate - 07/18/2008
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too sweet.
Hope you're moving on. - Report As Spam
- faduu - 07/17/2008
- aaaaaaaaaw T-T
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- Heavenly Tempest - 07/17/2008
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Poor Adam ;o;
*gives him a big hu--, pat* x3
Fiinneee. *hugs* - Report As Spam