The day...

• Artist: Destructive Scene
• Description: This is a poem about how i was feeling one day...
  im not sure if it is poetic.. but i am pretty proud of it..
  it is a bit mixed up and jumbled. though..
• Date: 07/16/2008
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i am 100% sure im gonna cry the day he leaves.
i am not even sure he's gonna try to cheer me up.
usually i wouldnt let my heart crumble like this.
but im gonna let some pieces fall.
he can pick them up the next time he comes.
usually i wouldnt let myself cry
just because someone has left.
i'd fake a smile and pretend its alright..
but i guess its different.
he's took some of my heart.
and i'm okay with it.
i am 100% sure he will come back one day
i am not even sure if he's ever gonna give me my heart back..

Comments

[rainbow vag sauce]

did he leave yet??
is he really gone nalin??

[the cheese to my macaroni]

I agree with Phoebe...It's not the best poem out there but it gets the point across and it does have a lovely point....Rate my poem too?

[PhoebeHaliwell13]

Its not the best poem. However, it is still a poem and the concept of the poem is very clear. So overall, its a good poem. and =) kool 1st comment!!