"In Africa"

• Artist: Pwale
• Description: A "Word-Box" poem. As in...Someone gave me a box of cut out words and I made a poem with 'em.
  
  I think it's cool. This isn't a real description because I hate analyzing and explaining poetry, even my own. [i]Especially[/i] my own. Please read and I'd appreciate comments! I'd love to know what people think this poem is about! Thank you!
• Date: 07/16/2008
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In Africa
BOOM
A hammer-kiss
They are born
Forming hard black hurt
Cry, Africa, Cry
Pain happened there
I am there
He is there
She is there
BOOM
Start, happy promise, start
Red-hot like is forming
Cry, Africa, Cry
Love happens there

Comments

[Pwale]

They really are! And you can come up with some really great stuff with these too, like magnet poetry (same principle, now that it occurs to me)

[Toastbusters]

Love in Africa - beautiful juxtaposition.
I made one of these before, with three other people and a huge stable of words.
Something Frankenstein as a happy homosexual.
They're a lot of fun, eh?