Beauty in Coffin

• Artist: Sir Fluff-n-Stuff
• Description: I was just sitting in class not paying attention as usual, wwhen suddenly I came up with this!
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: beauty coffin romance death

Her voice was a melody in my ears.
Her eyes were beauitful artwork I held so dear.
Her beauty had shine with all it's might.
Her stride was mesmorizing through my sight.
Even as she lays there in an everlasting slumber...

my heart still beats for her...

Comments

[Shuri Umi]

good job!

there's heart in it...lots too.....



but can you add more thought? try and make it stretch a little

[babygurl2795]

OoOoh. I like it. Short but great.

¬nyaa....

[Sir Fluff-n-Stuff]

thx alot biggrin

[Beta Crucis]

Amazing. It has so much meaning within it.
I loved it.
I don't pay attention in class either. I tend to get bored and just write poems randomly.

[Elluta]

short but so much meaning...