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Midday Standard
The metallic clang
Of silver ladles
Against stainless pots
That have discolored
With age.
A protruding belly
Peeks
Over the waistband
Of worn sweats
The kind with the elastic.
Once bright eyes
Dulled to a blue
Like faded jeans
Are framed by lashes
Thick with clumped mascara.
A thin face is
Skeletal and leathery
With lipstick
Like a cherry stain
Across narrow lips.
Hair the same grey
As an angry ocean
Caught
In a black plastic net.
Perfumed
With sticky buns and
Charred chili
As once white sneakers dance
Over worn tiled floors.
Living large and loud
In the 60s
So that now
Always tired and grumpy
Smoked-out and
Dated.
Every morning
Donning the same shabby
Uniform
The one with the
Grease stains that will
Never come out.
She trudges to work
And wraps the clear plastic
Disposable
Apron around her
Ample hips.
Hungry faces
File past
Filled with disappointment
As the last hot dog
Is clamed.

- Title: Midday Standard
- Artist: Elda-Chan
- Description: Written for an English class assigment. Advanced Critique Encouraged.
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: life normality lunchlady
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sweenys_Revenge - 02/12/2009
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The imagery made me chuckle.
I like how you gave the typical lunch lady a new spin without changing her. - Report As Spam
- Winry_Rockbell799 - 07/16/2008
- I loved this! great images! made me feel like i could really see and feel this! nice work 5 stars smile
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- FaithEmblem - 07/16/2008
- Oh my, I love this poem x) The imagery is so lovely, it really seems to caricature the life of a lunch lady! Ha ha. . .
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