I am

• Artist: Rayne Light
• Description: This is a poem that i did for school last year and a lot of the teachers and other students loved it so.... i whated to see if if everyone on gaia will like it too so... comment nicely plz and ty.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: life

I am hard, cold as ice.
I wonder what tomorrow brings to me.
I hear the sadness of the world.
I see fear flash throw every ones eyes.
I am hard, cold as ice.
I pretend not to care.
I feel the chill in the air.
I touch my fears with hope.
I worry about every one close to me.
I cry in the corners of my mind.
I am hard, cold as ice.
I understand the sadness in the world.
I say the truth that no one hears.
I dream of the future that may be.
I hope to see a brighter day.
I am hard, cold as ice.

Comments

[musicbyme]

it's very good. i giv it 4 star. u could improve and make it longer r something like that. i hope to hear lots more from u. remember to keep on writing! biggrin

[iChemical-kiss]

I did that in school....What school do you go to? o.o Mine ish i am too
holy crap that'd be cool if we went to the same school! O-O Awesome razz P

[damn bird ate my C-3PO]

Very cool! I like it!