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The trumpet sound, on merry ground
All of the band is here
Couples try to dance or die
And wash away their fears
What fun is this? This midnight jaunt?
The players never wain
Won’t stop till down and never pause
On empty skies or rain
Good sport here, passion there
Dancers young and old
The little boy skips with joy and flare
His tale yet to be told
The old man chats in the corner chair
Not quite so bold
Behind the glass, there they sit and ask,
The disheveled and the weak
“Can we join in too?”
The band is in a fury
More exuberant than before
Begging cries drown and die
Against the joyous fervor
THE MIDNIGHT PLAYERS MARCH ON
- by El Lubricabre |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Midnight Players
- Artist: El Lubricabre
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Description:
I wrote this for a creative writing project awhile ago. :cute:
Thought I'd take a shot at this arena stuffs... - Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: music ignorance midnight
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Toastbusters - 07/15/2008
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Sorry, that sounds mean, doesn't it? I just wanted to say GRAAA.
If you fix up your pacing, choke up on your line length and stanza length, this could be pretty good! - Report As Spam
- Toastbusters - 07/15/2008
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I HATE poorly implemented ABAB rhyme schemes! GRAAAAAAA.
Actually this is pretty okay, considering it's another sonnet.
And I love your avatar name! - Report As Spam