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A boulder makes a sound
Like a panned flute as
It drifts into the ground where all thoughts go,
A snoring shade of gray
Denting the asphalt – Now curlicues of a
Lack of introspect.
If it could talk, it would tell you –
Heavy brains fall hard.
It rests here for a while,
Trying to dig into the ground
For any idea at all.
Elsewhere –
And in fact not in the ground – is
A glass marble of thought,
Screeching through the air like
A hostile piccolo.
The latter spots the former through
A bothersome cumulonimbus of outward conflicts,
Drifts more slowly down,
And at last collides.
A crack appears in the crash-landed brain –
All the broken pencil lead that went into this –
Grows, and makes a snuggly crater
Up top for the marble idea.
Repairs can be done later.
- Title: Long Title
- Artist: ysms2
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Description:
Full title: Inspirational Vengeance or All Good Things Fall from the Sky and Crash Ironically and Especially Violently
A little something I whipped up several months ago and am now submitting, because I like gold. @w@ - Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: cartoonboulderinspirationvengeance
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Comments (3 Comments)
- is that a bear - 02/03/2010
- absolutely delicious! loving it! read mine and comment back? not as good as yours i will say, but i try :/
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- HolySonata - 07/15/2008
- Very nice. I don't think my poem would be considered a poem...>_<
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- x Cresentia x - 07/15/2008
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Whoot, Squi!! =D
Me likeys a lot!! I wish I were as good as you with the whole poetry thing... xDD - Report As Spam