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That Night
that night
that fate full night
what hap end i do not know
what hap end no one knows
but i can promise you one thing it was one night that i could never forget
not in my inter life
some times i wonder
if it even hap end
there is no record
then it all went blank...
byTaylo6635
- Title: that night
- Artist: taylo6635
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- Date: 07/15/2008
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- Final Yumi - 07/15/2008
- good 4/5 ^^
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- Frozen Lake - 07/15/2008
- hap end? Try happened, sorry, you get a 1
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- MyfriendsareDohnuts - 07/15/2008
- I like it although, since it is poetry, if you just capitilized the I's then it would have been more poet like. I like it I really do.
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