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Life to me is like a dream,
something real,
that ends up being fake.
It makes me think.
It makes me wonder.
What is my fate?
When will I go under?
When someone dies,
where do they wake?
Where is their home?
Where was it that they lay?
For so many years,
they were caught up in a dream.
What crazy things did they live for?
What crazy things did they see?
What kind of life did they live?
How many times did they fear,
fear they were going to die?
How many times did they love?
How many times did they cry?
All these things,
are surreal and fake.
Yet if this is the case,
why are we alive?
What does it mean to pray?
Let me give you an answer,
not something to deep,
and not something too frail or weak.
Life is like a test.
It all depends on you.
To study consistently will help,
rather than to weep the day it is due.
So realize your dream,
and enjoy it while you can!
Go outside! Smell the roses!
Be merry! Be glad!
Are you ready?
Was your dream worth the while?
You'll know when you can read this,
and still give me a smile.
Only then will you know,
that this life, this dream, is truly worth your while...

- Title: Is life a dream?
- Artist: KingBet
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Description:
This is officially my first work, and I know because I just spent the last hour typing this. :D
Hopefully after reading this you'll be inspired to live your life to the fullest. So many of the other works here were so depressing, or about love... So I thought I'd talk about life. Tell me what you think? Or just tell me if you were able to smile :) Also don't take my work too seriously, its really just food for thought. - Date: 04/13/2010
- Tags: life dream kingbet
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Gold_Cherry101 - 06/02/2010
- very lovely poem king! really does make you think...
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- kellynana - 05/28/2010
- omg so cool ^_^ very very cool tottally cool cool cool not kiddin XD hw u doin by the way im just scared to appear in front of you ^_^ well it was fun wheni was with u well im havin fun with my loyal dark knights but the problem is the keep chasin me if i dissappear on their sides T^T well your poetry was cool even the love poem u told me ^_^ ill give you a 100% for it. well i nevr believed u that u were good at poetry well im not good at it im good at fashion sense tc always dear nice poem
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- The Unfinished Story - 04/22/2010
- Quite refreshing from the others as you said,which were depressing,or about love.I'd agree more about life being a dream(By me,illusion) than a test!Leaving that aside,the way you tried to incorporate rhyme is good,and you wrote with optimism.4/5
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